Lucas.S
Learning blogs for Dec.4/14
What did we do?
Today for the second
block of humanities we got a booklet. Our teacher discussed what we need to do
with it (highlighting, outlines, developing paragraph etc.) We got to work on
those type of things for half of the second block.
Why did we do it (learning intention)
Whey did we do it?
because our teacher wants us to learn more about writing skills. She wants to
learn more about writing for our stories we write. Also there's this thing she
put in our booklet
TOWER t-think o-organize
w-write e-edit r-rewrite.
Reflections and connections-
It's important to know
this stuff because when we write stories, so we can meet expectations (length
of story, punctuation/grammar) stuff like that. Why is it important? so we can
write stories better, it would be useful when we write our stories and blog
posts. It can help us with those types of things.
Homework reminders-
We have 5 outlines do tomorrow. The 4 developing paragraph ones, and one
other of our topic choice. And the whole booklet is due in 2 weeks.
Homework tips-
Tips for homework, you can watch videos or you can e-mail our teacher if
your stuck on something you can ask her for help.
Hi Lucas, I like how you included titles and headings, and how you were clear about the instructions. However, I think you should work on how you write your sentences. For example, you should start with a capital letter for your second and third paragraphs. Also, maybe you should end your sentences with a period, such as in your second paragraph. Finally, I think you should be more descriptive in your paragraphs. For example, you should add more details or explain more in your paragraphs. Good job for your first learning blog!
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